13 April 2014

Hidden Meanings

Hi guys! Here's the short story I've been working on. I would appreciate you guys reading it and giving me some feedback in the comments below. I really hope you enjoy it!

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Last summer, we went visit my Gramps at his house by the beach. It was my two younger pests of brothers, Richard and John, the baby of the family, Roxanne and I. It was a warm summer day and the boys were kicking a ball in the yard. Roxanne was entertaining herself in her room with her dolls. I was in no mood to participate in either activities, so I slipped into the library.

I pushed open the heavy door and the musty smells of aging books assaulted my nostrils. I headed for the cozy armchair by the window – a copy of ‘Pride and Prejudice’ in hand. Suddenly, I tripped over the rug and went flying – my novel skidding to a stop in a dusty corner. Luckily, I caught myself on a nearby wall, before receiving anything more than a few bruises. I begun to brush my jeans, when a slow creaking sound began. A small door, barely above my knees, swung open in the wall. Naturally, my curiosity was piqued. I decided to go in and explore. I slipped in, using the faint light of my cellphone to find my way down the tricky stairs.

I had barely made it two steps down, when my light caught the flash of a face. I shrieked and stumbled, landing straight on my butt. My heart thumping in my chest,  slowly directed the light back to the same spot, fully expecting an assailant. What I saw then was a complete surprise. The face I’d seen was… merely a dressmaker’s dummy!

I slowly went down the rest of the steps, weary of any more unexpected surprises. As I used my light to scan the room, I saw racks of gowns and dresses in every shape, size and color lined up against all the walls. A small table with a sewing machine on it and  full length mirror stood to one corner. It was just like a clothes store, albeit a very old one. I stumbled around the room, looking for a light switch, when I suddenly heard a faint sound. As it came closer, I realised it was Roxanne.

“Josephine, I need your help!”, she warbled.

Oh bother! I hated it when she called me that. I wistfully glanced at the engima of a room, waiting to be explored. Then, with a heavy sigh, I hauled myself up the stairs and ducked out of the door. Almost as if there was a hidden trigger, the door swung shut behind me. How was I supposed to find it now!?
With a cross expression on my face, I shouted to Roxanne, “What is it, Roxanne. I’m in the library. And how many times have I told you to call me Jo!”

She came scampering in, her footsteps pattering against the marble floor. Her sapphire eyes twinkled and she smiled to reveal her adorable dimples.

“I’m sorry, Jo”.

It was hard to stay mad at her for too long.

“What can I do for you, little miss?”

“Can you open the trunk for me, Jo? I want a new dress”

“Whatever in the world is wrong with this one?” Sometimes, I found it hard to understand all her fashion concerns.

She shrugged. “I just don’t like this one very much. Come now!”

I yawned and began to follow her, when suddenly, my eyes snapped open. “ Wait a second, Rox! You come with me”

I lead her to the wall, looking around for some sort of a trigger, I needn;t have worried. There was a simple switch in the wall, which opened  the door.

“What are we doing, Jo?”, Roxanne whispered, clenching my hand.

“You’ll see”, I whispered back, elated at the idea of finally see what the room held.

The evasive light switch was eventually found and a dim light came on, revealing several dresses, resplendant in their glory. A thin layer of dust had settled on everything, but my amazement knew no limits.

“Wow!!!”, Roxanne gasped, as she ran her hands over the material.

“Let’s dress you up, princess”. I found Roxanne a small floor-length purple gown with gold trim and pink beads. She carefully put it on, wriggling with excitement. I put her hair into a French braid, as she gazed into the mirror.

“Jo, you need to put one on too!!” At her insistence, I slipped on a simple green gown with silver trim and a simple V-neck.  I let my hair escape from it’s elastic prison, and my brown curls tumbled over my shoulders. I actually felt like a princess!

I dragged out a trunk, which as it turned out, held slippers in a multitude of  shapes and sizes. We both put on a pair and the look was complete.

“Jo, let’s go show Gramps”, she said, her voice brimming with joy. I simply nodded, too dumbstruck to reply.

We found him reclining in the family room. One look at us, and his eyes started to well with tears. I rushed over to him in alarm.

“What’s wrong, Gramps?”

“ Oh my dear Josephine. You see dear, your grandmother was a great seamstress. When she- when she passed away, I couldn’t bring myself to clear her secret cranny. Your mother shared a great bond with her, and since you could never meet her, your mother named you after her. Seeing you stand there in her old clothing just reminded me of the first time I ever saw her. Forgive your old Gramps for getting a little emotional.”

I gave him a big hug, and as I sat there – in my finery – in my Gramps’ arms, I truly felt like Josephine belonged to me, for the very first time.


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